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[Dusty Iron Grave]

Well...

Well, i...

actualyl like this =D. Your chord progession was very nice, i really liked that alot. the melody was great too man, good stuff here. keep it up bro. sounds pretty good concidering your using fruity loops presents samples and vst's. i liked this, you did a good job here. good luck getting all your shit back that really sucks how you lost everything.

well i think you should deserve a cookie for this, yeah. you are full of win my friend.

for now..

9/10
5/5

-Dj Clayface

Father-of-Death responds:

I don't know if i should say thank you or not. This review is confusing.

[Fredgy - Dance to the Rhythm]

eh its okay.

Well, im going to give you a honest review here. Cause i want you to improve, so please dont take anything to hard. okay? I'm speaking the truth right here. So dont be mad at me for speaking the truth. Anyways the review...

Well first of all (its been said before) this song is a tad too loud. Send all the instruments to a mixer channel, and fiddle around with the knobs untill they're all not hitting the red zone. Stay out of the red zone buddy. And probbaly add a compressor to the kick, that will make it stand out more. Umm the drums are a little bit boring its the same loop over and over. (from what i heard) Try adding some snare rolls, Snare fillers. you know? just to variate the song a little. And change up the pattern of it too, change is good. Sounds like you used 3xOsc (to me it sounds like it, you may have used something else) but anyways, yeah its a great vst if you know how to use it. Maybe try using some of the presets? or even better, get Nexus. Replace some of the synths with a nice saw. Then that would make it better. I'm not really a fan of that "popcorn" kinda of sound. So IMO you should take that out. Umm... maybe add a key change into this song. that would make it sound a tad more better. Also adding a breakdown along with a epic build up. Then this song would be awesome. Maybe add more interesting melodies to this too. Cause im being honest here, im not feeling the main melody at all. It could be WAAAY better. You just gotta work it out. So yeah try that, add more interesting melodies. Well thats all i really gotta say about this song. Its pretty decent...

SO so sum up what i just said ; Fix the volume, make the percussion more interesting, make the melodies more interesting, use different VST's.

Yeah, thats about it. I was being 100% honest. So please if i said anything harsh, dont take it to hard okay. its the truth. deal with it. (haha im not trying to be an asshole)

But yeah, thanks for reviewing my song, and yeah i did have a little free time. so here i am writing reviews. i hope you liked my long juicy review. keep up the good work man, goodluck on future projects! ;)

Vote : 4/5
Rate : 8.5/10

-Dj Clayface

Fredgy responds:

hello there! , first of all.. thanks for the HUGE review! :O
then, reviews like yours, you can't take it to hard.. it is one big help review.. I appreciate that as hell! :O
the first one, about putting everything in mixer channel, I did it already ( I got already another version of this song, where I tried to keep everything out of the red zone, bcause Bjra said me I needed to do it there :p )
then, I know 'bout the drum piece, but i am not a good one in getting some changes in it, and that it sounds right also :p
about the snare rolls/filters, explain me please :D
I didn't use 3xosc, i am not a good one in using that :p
I'll see what I can do, but first I gotta get the things like Nexus then :-)
all the rest, ye I know it could be waay better ;-)
but at the other side, it is just my 5th song :p

Thanks for being honest about the song, that is what helps the most huh! ;-)

Grts
Fredgy

[HappyTranceLoop.(SongVersion)]

Its nice, good stuff.

Well, i loved the loop. And when i finally noticed that the full song is out. I just had to review it. So heres my Review:

First of all, GREAT melody. It really sticks out, and gets stuck in your head.... Which is a very good thing haha. But, really... the only problem that i had with this song is that it is... a little repeative. So what you could do is maybe alter the lead melody a little? Perhaps add a key change in there? (If you know how to do that). The snare was really nice, although it could of been a little louder, I really like to hear a good sounding snare in a song, especially if its a trance/dance song. The break down at around 1:10 ish was a decent breakdown. It could still use some work. But its good, its good. I'm not saying it sucked, it just it could of been... a bit more epic if you know what i mean. Oh and the kick could definitly be a little stronger (unless my headphones are really weak) But i really couldnt hear it. What you could do is in the mixer, add a bass boost and a compresser. That should really make your kick stand out. Your intro was very nice, i really liked that alot, that sweeping noise really adds excitment to the song. Maybe add more snares into the song just to give it that "exciting" feeling. You know? But yeah, other than all that i said... This is a really good song, i LOVE that melody its great! The bass line was nice and solid, so thats good. But yeah, maybe just add a few more melodies into this song, and maybe another hamonizing melody behind the lead. Then it should sound really epic. Well thats all i could really think about, I dont really know what else to say. Great stuff right here, im glad you made a full song out of the loop. Keep up the good work man. AND of course i gave you a 10/10 and a 5/5. This song deserves it. Well thats all, maybe review my song? if you can thanks, if you cant its alright. Yeah thats all i gotta say.. I hope you like my long juicy review :D

- Dj Clayface

Sonomabob responds:

first of all: wow, what a review ;-)
thanks!
- kick is there, even if you cant hear it. perhaps my headset goes deeper than yours. but i didnt want to have a too strong kick.
- more snares? well i am quite bad when it comes to drums...

i am still quite unexperienced, making music now for not a complete year yet
but nevertheless i try to make my best :-)

[Happy Trance Loop.]

Wow great loop

Really good loop man, i love this. You should definitly make this into a complete song.

Sonomabob responds:

thanks ^^

perhaps I will make a full song of it.

[Frequency Overload]

Pretty good song.

Well i think this is pretty good. It'd be a great song for stepmania, Umm... not sure what else to say. But i really enjoyed it. great stuff man. keep it up

10/10
5/5

-Dj Clayface

SessileNomad responds:

mmm...makes me smile to hear you think its a step song, best game ever, i wonder if i can submit this to SMO to see if theyll put it in a mix...hmm.....

thanks dude

[-*Heaven of Inspiration*-]

Wow...

I just dont know what to say about this... its so epic. this is amazing wow. keep up the great work guys!

10/10
5/5
favorited

-Dj Clayface

Argyros responds:

:D Thanks so much! It really means a lot!

[Xtasy Kryptonite]

nice preview

Great song man, i love this man! i cant wait till the full version is out! I'm ageeing with the guy below me the scratching sound is kinda annoyhing. But what ever, with out that sound it just wouldnt sound right, so its all good. This is a great track though. it has a nice rave feel to it. the vocals are good man, i have my headphones on and it feels like the voices are going through my head O.O hahahaha great stuff man. But i would say maybe add a better build up. and a more intense climax, maybe a snare roll would make it more interesting. or something like that, great stuff though. you did a good job keep up the good work.

if you can, could you check out my song? Above Clouds 3.0
thanks

overall, amazing song.

10/10
5/5

-DJ Clayface

Aydin-Jewelz123 responds:

cheers for review mate, ye im gna sort out that sound, was trying to create an atmosphere of discomfort with it to convey a sort of eerie and discomfort feel gained from the drugs or whatever + am going to try and add some more power to the song and stuff to intensify it to the MAX :D

i will have a look at your stuff :)

cheers for review

[The Beauty of Rain and Snow]

yeah man, kick ass!

Wow man, this song amazing dude. And i agree with the guy below it really does remind my of smiley's music. You play stepmania too eh? do you by any chance have SMO? pm me if you do haha. ANYWAYS back to the review, i really enjoyed this song man, you really hit it on this one. Keep up the great work. This song is definitly going into my favorites man. What VST did you use for the lead? it sounds amazing.

well thats all i gotta say really, keep up the great work
good luck on future projects

10/10
5/5
favorited

SessileNomad responds:

yeah i used to be a god at Stepmania, but i had to delete 15 gigs of songs to make room for FL

i dont play SMO though

i used nexus as my vst for both leads

im glad you liked this song, cuz i lked it alot too

thanks much

[Super Loop]

i like this loop...

Great loop man, you should definitly make this into a full track. that be pretty awesome man. well i dont know else to say about this. its a great song man.
keep up the good work, good luck on future projects

10/10
5/5

LK412 responds:

Tyvm =]

[Party in the Cooler (demo)]

sytrus eh?

Well, im going to give you a honest review, so if i say anything please to take it to hard its the truth.

Well, the song doesnt suck. But its just boring, add more interesting sounds maybe try to use other VST's other than sytrus, try using 3xOsc maybe? Oh, and also maybe fix up the kick pattern. And... use more melodies, from what i hear its just the same melody but using defferent synths. Add maybe 2 or 3 more change it up a little. And make the drums a bit more interesting becuase pretty much all i hear is "kick kick kick kick kick kick kick kick kick snare kick snare kick snare kick snare kick kick kick kick" Its boring man, throw some snare rolls, some drum fills, and some hi hats. That should make the song more interesting. Maybe change up the bassline too, its a little boring just like the whole song (dont take that to hard, okay?). Well the song does need ALOT of work. But if you follow the tips i gave you, you should have a pretty solid song. Umm... i dont really know what else to say. Good luck on this song, i hope the finish product sounds good! Oh... and umm... the synth that comes in around 40 seconds. Its really annoying, maybe switch it with a saw. Try using the Hypersaw preset in sytrus thats actually a decent saw. Well, thats all i gotta say for now. If you can, review my song too?

Decent song, needs more work.

8/10
4/5

LupeGarcon responds:

Hey, thanks, man. This just a flat, unmastered demo i whipped up in about thirty to forty five minutes. I'm gonna be working hard on this one so check in later for the full version. Thanks for ALL the advice. I'm really new to FL and i'm still finding my way around it, but i'll get the hang of it pretty quick. I'll be fixing all the recommendations you made. You helped me alot. Oh, and btw, if you get a sec, listen to my other song and review it. Thanks! -Lupe-