Kay.
So like this d00d, his name was Henry right? And his ambition was to like i donnno. But like yeah then like Henry like, totally like went to like, this like place, like uhh yeah. And like he like didnt like, know what like, his like, ambition like was like, like was. So like uhh. Yeah. The end.
Mah gawd, that was beautiful. ;-;
Amazing.
I love how much emotion this piece has, right from the very start it caught my hears on how emotional and melodic it sounded. Great job on that one. I wouldnt mind maybe remixing this haha, (thats if i get your permission first though) But yeah, great track. But one think that you could definitly do to give it mroe realisim is changing up the velocity of the keys. That would really really make the piano piece sound more realistic. 30 minutes really? Thats real good man, just imagine what you could come up with if you worked on this for lets say, a few hours! :O Haha.
Keep up the great work. Lovin the piano song so much, so melodic and emotional. Sooooo... How about that remix? eh eh eh eh eh eh eh eh? haha.
Btw if you can, maybe you could listen to my piano solos? and maybe reviw them too :3 (rEtarded) and (Fuck me hard) I think you might like them :3
-Clayface
10/10
5/5
+Favorite
Haha thanks :D
You can definitely make a remix if you want, and tell me when you upload it ^_^
Its alright.
I agree with the guy below me, it REALLY sounds way to computerized. In an instant i knew this was a generated piano. But if thats the sound you were aiming for you hit it dead on xD. But if your aiming for a more realistic sound, i say changing up the BPM every 4 bars or so. (Just by like 1 or 3). And also change the velocity of the notes, so you can make the softer sader parts sounds more sad. Cause it sounds very very robotized if its the same velocity note every time. If you dont get what i mean, take a listen to my latest piano solo (rEtarded) and my other solo too (Fuck me hard) And you'll get what i mean by changing the velocitsy and tempo.
But other than that, i think i heard some off notes in theres somwhere. In the chords. Fix that up, Add some reverb to it, and LOTS OF IT. it'll make the piece stick out a whoooole lot more. Trust me. haha.
Well thats all ir eally have to say. Keep up the work. Maybe review my piano solo too? :3
-Clayface
I already understood what was meant, i know that the strenght of a note matters but do understand that the exporting to mp3 with this piano (its a VERY heavy piano vst) takes ages so its not fun to rework on, ill give it some thought though. Because you're right when all keys are the same strenght it does sound computerised.
On the off notes needing a fix i must disagree, every note is as it should be, especially in the chords.
I dont know what you mean with reverb, do you mean that notes sound longer? If so then i also disagree on that, there is thought in each key's lenght.
Ill look at your piano solo, even though they have absurd names.
knock knock...
Who's there?
Ben...
Ben who?
BEN - DOVER
HOLY SHIT A GAY JOKE
Pretty good!
Hey man, got your message :)
This song is pretty catchy i really like it, the bells you have are really nice. Great choice, honestly this track kinda reminds me of christmas haha. Maybe it's because of the bell sounds I don't know. But the bells are good dude. The sequences are pretty nice with the saws in the intro. Did you use sequences? Or did you put those together yourself? But yeah they're good. The arp at 2:04 is good, but maybe you could of add some variation to it so to make it more interesting. It's good though, it would of been better it had more variation to it. I like the bassline you used, it gives it a kind of... Dark feel. If you know what i mean, well that's how i hear it as. Great stuff.
The kick was nice, I liked it alot too. It was thumpin through my headphones which is good. Those hi hats are amazing bro, they sound so sexy haha. They were just at the right levels, usually in songs i hear the hi hats are to loud and such. But on your tune they were just at the right levels which were great. The crash was real nice too, nothing really else to say about the crash it's good as it is. You should add a nice clap to complement the kick that would of really topped it off. Also you should maybe change up your kick pattern too instead of having it just "thump - thump - thump - thump" through out the whole thing you know?. Maybe one thing you could of added was some snare rolls, to make the song more interesting. Plus it would give your build up more enegery to the main leads.
Speaking of build ups....
I feel your build ups could use a little bit more, to me they sounded kinda plain. You could of done alot more to it. To give it that extra "oomph" if you get what i mean haha. Maybe some kick rolls too? Just some ideas. You could of added a high pass filter to make it sound a little bit better when its building up. Hmm, but yeah. Your build up was okay, the breakdowns could of been a bitter better/longer too.
The length of the song was alright, but it kinda felt a little short to me. It could be a little bit longer, then you would have time to make the build ups longer and more epic, and the climaxes alot better. Your climax wasnt so great, i felt it wasnt ear pleasing enough. The melodies were good though, you just need a better climax melody. Your outro was kinda plain too, it ended kind of sudden. The melody plays, then just suddenly stops. You could had it die it a bit more smoothly such as changing up the melody more and more untill the melody is plain and simple.
Well yeah, the song is great overall. I really like those melodies, there catchy and fun. The arps were good, bells were a nice choice. Hi hats were sexy, crash was nicely done, the kick was nice and thumpin. Bad climax melody, bad outro. Decent song structure. I give this song and overall score of... 9/10. The score was pretty low, i 5'd it and it stands at a 3.90. Which i think is NOT what this song deserves. I think this song should at least deserve a 4.30 score. if that, sucks you got bombed. I'll try 5 this song every chance i get just to help you out. And because I'm a nice guy like that. Haha.
Well thats all i really gotta say about this song, i hope you enjoyed my long review haha ;). Send me another message if you want me to review some new songs you put up. I would be more than happy to do that. If i got some spare time (like i do now) I'll review as soon as i get your message. Probably, haha. Keep up the great work though. Your song kinda inspires me to make some new originals :D. Thats all i gotta say, good job bro. Review some of my songs too aye? Haha.
-Clayface
JEEZ! lol.
Im going to respond to everything you said because i got nothin goin on lol.
-They were pre-made sequences with Sytrus but i played around with the sound a bit to get what i was looking for.
-I did actually spend a bit of time mastering this song, so good to hear that the
HiHats were sexy :)
-The kick was just a Default kick from VEC2 with soundgoodizer to it :) but i did like its thumpability.
-clap would have been nice, but i was thinking that maybe to much would've been going on and people wouldnt focus on the melody, i guess if i set it low enough it would be there but wouldnt disturb everything else.
-I do admit that i should have spent more time on intros and the outro. :(
-Thanks for 5 and glad that i kinda inspired you to make some originals :)
It's alright!
I really like this song, it has a nice feel to it. I'm not really a big electro/house fan, but i like it. I'm listening on crap speakers right now, so i can really critize on the mixing and mastering. But from what i can hear its actually pretty good. Keep it up man, the only thing i have a problem with is its a tad to long for me. It feels like the song just kinda keeps on going and going and going XD. but oh well, haha. Umm... Thats all i can really say. keep up th great work ayeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeet. Peace.
-Clayface.
ye ye thx 4 da review. The reasoning behind the track being 'long' and goes on and on is of it's genre. If you listen to electro/house often, u'l find that almost if not all tracks are long and go on like that ;)
Its nice.
Yeah i like this, its real chill bro. Nice one, keep up the great work eh.
-Clayface
thanks man!
Oh please please...
Cans you make moars?
alright. i'll try. and thanks for the 5 and 10. ;D
Sounds pretty neat.
I thought over all the song was great, but the intro was a little to long. But thats just me. And honestly i'm not really a fan of the whole "Doink" bass thing. But its okay, its just not ear pleasing to me as other basses. But when the main leads come in thats when it gets hot. Love the leads, the melody too. Wicked sick stuff right 'ere. Keep up the great work yo.
-Clayface
Thanks man, glad you liked it, maybe the newer version would be in your league?
Hey, I'm Clayface. I make electronica music. Thats all there really is to know about me. Been using FL for 2 years now. Yeye. The End.
Age 31, Male
Music production.
Canada
Joined on 3/6/08
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