mmmburgers's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[What You Do [N3MIX][+Clayface]]

YUSHHHHHHHHHH

HEEHEE YAY FOR THIS SONG. If this song had a taste, it would probably taste sweet, and yummy. The kind of candy were its like "UGHH WHAT THE FUCK IS... whoa thats good man, give me more!!!!"

N3XUZ responds:

Hahaha, let's go with that too bro. :P

[Codec Blue (~PhY~)]

It's alrihgt.

The song itself is good, although it kinda sounds like there is too many sounds playing at once, and it's hard to distinguish what the melody is. It almost hash a harsh sound to it. Some of the levels really need to get adjusted on this one. The kick is hard though, which is what I like about it. :)

I couldnt really hear the blue melody untill near the end when all the instruments took a break from playing. Then the second time through I heard the melody a bit more.

Overall it was a good song, keep it up. :)

-Clayface

And if you got some spare time, could you reviwe my song too? ^.^

Phyortek responds:

The songs been updated dude, based off of what you said in your review :-D

Thanks for the awesome review, I gave you one back.

Heres the link dude http://www.newgrounds.com/audio/liste n/308791

[Kirby Sees Victory Sky High]

Very upbeat!

It was a nice tune all the way through, very upbeat and happy. Which kept my attention all the way through. :) Good job on that, I usually dont listen to much Video Game style music. But this right here is nice. I'm probably on my 3rd of 4th time listening to it haha!

Keep up the great work, loving it!

-Clayface

Oh and could you maybe review my song too? Hehe!! ^.^

Manuelsi responds:

thanks!aparently i fully...SUCCESS in one!i should find the way to keep me this way...and i'll probably will review urs

[SUIA-the fall of man]

It's nice.

I love the feeling the song gives you, with the right kind of lyrics it could be a very emotional song. Or a very epic one. Loved it all the way through. :D

Although I do feel that your strings were lacking, I don't know they just felt kind of cheesy in a way. The strings themsevles, not the chords. The piano was great, went well while harmonizing with the chord progession.

This song is tight! Keep up the great work. That solo was so bad ass. ^.^

-Clayface

Could you maybe review my latest song too? ^.^

superuberinsaneausm responds:

thanks for the review, the reason the stings sound bad is cause i dont have a good vst for em and the attack was way low

[{Dj-L} Celestial Night]

Sick melody!!!

Dude, this is so awesome man. I just LOVE that melody. And the bassline too, its really catchy stuff! :D

Meonly70 responds:

Thanks a lot man :)

[Mechanical Brawl]

Agree with the dewd below me.

The synths sound very VERY sytrus'y. Sound like Cerbra saw, and.... (Cant remember what that one was called). Also the drums are nice, but could easily tell that they were loops. Nice to see the varition in them though, such as pitch change ect. Over all it was okay. The drums were interesting enough to keep me listening through out the song. Also, at times the drums were a tad to loud, drowning out the other synths.

Keep up the work, and if you can check out my latest song, review too?

-Clayface

Numi responds:

Actually, it's not Sytrus. I used some presets in SimSynth (House, and something else I forget...) that I just applied a few small effects to. I'm glad you liked the drums! I worked the hardest on those. A review of your latest is on its way =)

[Towards Dead End (C.O.B cover)]

Wow, again!!!!

Children of Bodom is one of my favorite bands Hehe!. Also a real nice nice song choice, personally it's one of my favorites. And you did a fawkin excellent job. I loved the way the two guitars sounded harmonized together. Love it!!!!

-Clayface
10/10
5/5

wilb0b responds:

AHH!!! thanks and its great to see another bodom fan here lol

[Ultimatum Sanctum (gtr Solos)]

Holy shites and a half.

Wow this is so sick man, Your chord progessions gave the song such a great mood, and the solo to harmonize the chord progessions made it even better.

Although my only problem with it, is that the high end was a little too high. And at parts I couldnt really hear the lead solo guitar quite clearly. It might just be my headphones.

But other than that, I definitly enjoyed this man. This is for sure going into my favorites. Will be checking at your page for more too. ^.^

Keep up the fantastic shreddagexorz. You've inspried me to pick up my own guitar again. Hehe!

-Clayface

10/10
5/5
+ Favorite

wilb0b responds:

yeah using really good head phones some times suck cuz people with out wont experience what i hear what i do/ they make crap sound good too lol

[Touching the sky.]

Good song, considering your age.

Hey man, I'm in a good mood today. And feel like helping out felling FL Producers! Soooo your in luck! I'm going to try be as detailed and say this as nice constructive critism way as possible. (So please don't take any of my critisism to harsh).

First I want to talk about the overall song and song structure. The song itself is great sounding actually, I really like it man. The melody is catchy, got a catchy bassline. And best of all NO OFF NOTES. Which is really good. Cause if you have off notes thats a bad thing and it can really ruin your music. But good thing for you all your notes are in key and on the right scale when the chords change. But overall the song has a nice happy uplifiting feel to it, which is great! Sounds great. And now for the song structure itself... It does get a little repetative during the middle part where the melody repeats itself for quite a bit of measures. I'm sure this song would sound alot better if it was shortened down to say... Two minutes, or maybe Three Minutes. Anywhere in that time range and it would of been great. And your "Breakdown" part could of been ALOT better, it was definitly feeling empty. And the climax wasnt so great. Infact it didnt really feel like a climax at all. So thats something you definitly need working on.

And now as for percussion goes, your instruments you chose were okay. But they were sounding a little dry (same with your synths too, but I'll get to that later in the review). To prevent this "Dry" sound that you have, you could of added reverb and delays to your Hats and Claps (or snare, in your case). I wouldnt recemend using Reverb and Delays on the kick. Maybe try compressing the kick (if you don;t know about compressing I highly suggest you learn. You can easily find some tutorials on youtube). And one thing that you DEFINITLY need is a Crash Cymbal. I didn't hear a single one during the mix. If there were, you didnt put them in the spots needed. I suggest putting a crash everytime you intruduce a new intrument. Or to mark were changes in the song are happenening (Such as intro > Main > Break > Climax > outro) If you get what I mean. But yeah, crashes you need more of.

Now for a little talk on FX. I didnt hear much, other than a lowpass during your "Breakdown" you could of definitly used ALOT more effects on your instruments and synths. Such as the intro Piano. It would sound so much greater if it had revern, and a small delay. it sounds boring. Don't be afraid to add to much, but don't be add to little. A good song will always consist of Reverb and Delay. Especially on the synths themselves. It will give them a more unique feel, rather than have them without any reverb. And as for EQing goes, I doubt you did any. But you should really learn how to EQ and such. Just to boost those frequencies where they really need them. Like in your hats, your hi end synths. Also when you EQ you don't want to OVER EQ them. This will give it a muddy unclear sound. The Low end of your song could definitly use a boost.

Now for some final words, overall the song is good! But it COULD be alot better. Such as a shorter time length, more effects used. I really can't think of anything else to critise on this track. The overall sound was very uplifting, and had a nice tone to it. The kind of melody that makes me bob my head with a smile saying "Man thats one happy as melody" XD haha!

But great job on the tune man, I hope my review helps. If theres anything you need help with, don't be afraid to ask me on MSN. I will try my best to help where needed. Keep the songs coming, keep up the great work. Hope to hear more tracks from you soon. Take it easy man.

-Clayface

Beats4Beets responds:

Hey, Clayface. Thanks for the long ass review, eh?! xD
I agree with everything. But the EQ, Compression and Reverb, i have only learned recentely. And i didn't bother changing the song.. i might some other time though.

The middle part WAS long haha, i was actually purposely trying to make the whole song long. And the intro was infact quite boring.. I sometimes like skipping it and just listening to the catchy melody.

The tips are help though. I didn't quite know where to use the compression, delay, EQ or reverb... Now i have a better idea of where to use them and im probably gonna follow you instruction on my next track.

Thanks a lot man, imma talk to you on msn, eh?

PS: Sorry for some bad english, Im a freakin Canadian that goes to a french school.

[SN | No Purpose Flour | SN]

Uhh..

WHOO!!! YEAH!!!!

SessileNomad responds:

umm actually its just...

WOO!!! YEAH!!!

lol i gotta get more of that awesome fucker