mmmburgers's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[Brks Trance Oldskool (DnB Rmx)]

Lovin it. :3

Loving the track, sounds pretty good. But from my opinion i liked V3 better. Heh. But still lovin this on too. keep the tunes comin!

[lost the game]

Fuck you man.

I lost the game.

[Phantom - (WF1)/F-777]

Holy shit...

Brb gotta change my pants.

[~ElpH~Energy]

Pretty good!

Hey man, got your message :)

This song is pretty catchy i really like it, the bells you have are really nice. Great choice, honestly this track kinda reminds me of christmas haha. Maybe it's because of the bell sounds I don't know. But the bells are good dude. The sequences are pretty nice with the saws in the intro. Did you use sequences? Or did you put those together yourself? But yeah they're good. The arp at 2:04 is good, but maybe you could of add some variation to it so to make it more interesting. It's good though, it would of been better it had more variation to it. I like the bassline you used, it gives it a kind of... Dark feel. If you know what i mean, well that's how i hear it as. Great stuff.

The kick was nice, I liked it alot too. It was thumpin through my headphones which is good. Those hi hats are amazing bro, they sound so sexy haha. They were just at the right levels, usually in songs i hear the hi hats are to loud and such. But on your tune they were just at the right levels which were great. The crash was real nice too, nothing really else to say about the crash it's good as it is. You should add a nice clap to complement the kick that would of really topped it off. Also you should maybe change up your kick pattern too instead of having it just "thump - thump - thump - thump" through out the whole thing you know?. Maybe one thing you could of added was some snare rolls, to make the song more interesting. Plus it would give your build up more enegery to the main leads.

Speaking of build ups....

I feel your build ups could use a little bit more, to me they sounded kinda plain. You could of done alot more to it. To give it that extra "oomph" if you get what i mean haha. Maybe some kick rolls too? Just some ideas. You could of added a high pass filter to make it sound a little bit better when its building up. Hmm, but yeah. Your build up was okay, the breakdowns could of been a bitter better/longer too.

The length of the song was alright, but it kinda felt a little short to me. It could be a little bit longer, then you would have time to make the build ups longer and more epic, and the climaxes alot better. Your climax wasnt so great, i felt it wasnt ear pleasing enough. The melodies were good though, you just need a better climax melody. Your outro was kinda plain too, it ended kind of sudden. The melody plays, then just suddenly stops. You could had it die it a bit more smoothly such as changing up the melody more and more untill the melody is plain and simple.

Well yeah, the song is great overall. I really like those melodies, there catchy and fun. The arps were good, bells were a nice choice. Hi hats were sexy, crash was nicely done, the kick was nice and thumpin. Bad climax melody, bad outro. Decent song structure. I give this song and overall score of... 9/10. The score was pretty low, i 5'd it and it stands at a 3.90. Which i think is NOT what this song deserves. I think this song should at least deserve a 4.30 score. if that, sucks you got bombed. I'll try 5 this song every chance i get just to help you out. And because I'm a nice guy like that. Haha.

Well thats all i really gotta say about this song, i hope you enjoyed my long review haha ;). Send me another message if you want me to review some new songs you put up. I would be more than happy to do that. If i got some spare time (like i do now) I'll review as soon as i get your message. Probably, haha. Keep up the great work though. Your song kinda inspires me to make some new originals :D. Thats all i gotta say, good job bro. Review some of my songs too aye? Haha.

-Clayface

Elph responds:

JEEZ! lol.

Im going to respond to everything you said because i got nothin goin on lol.

-They were pre-made sequences with Sytrus but i played around with the sound a bit to get what i was looking for.

-I did actually spend a bit of time mastering this song, so good to hear that the
HiHats were sexy :)

-The kick was just a Default kick from VEC2 with soundgoodizer to it :) but i did like its thumpability.

-clap would have been nice, but i was thinking that maybe to much would've been going on and people wouldnt focus on the melody, i guess if i set it low enough it would be there but wouldnt disturb everything else.

-I do admit that i should have spent more time on intros and the outro. :(

-Thanks for 5 and glad that i kinda inspired you to make some originals :)

[Anywhere [N3]]

YTeye.

Loops nicely!

N3XUZ responds:

D'aww, thanks.

[Dj UrOz - Discotek Electro Mix]

It's alright!

I really like this song, it has a nice feel to it. I'm not really a big electro/house fan, but i like it. I'm listening on crap speakers right now, so i can really critize on the mixing and mastering. But from what i can hear its actually pretty good. Keep it up man, the only thing i have a problem with is its a tad to long for me. It feels like the song just kinda keeps on going and going and going XD. but oh well, haha. Umm... Thats all i can really say. keep up th great work ayeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeet. Peace.

-Clayface.

DjUrOz responds:

ye ye thx 4 da review. The reasoning behind the track being 'long' and goes on and on is of it's genre. If you listen to electro/house often, u'l find that almost if not all tracks are long and go on like that ;)

[r2~ Shadows in the Night]

Its nice.

Yeah i like this, its real chill bro. Nice one, keep up the great work eh.

-Clayface

raving2thegrave responds:

thanks man!

[Konflikt (Draft)]

Oh please please...

Cans you make moars?

DJ-Qwamii responds:

alright. i'll try. and thanks for the 5 and 10. ;D

[{Dj-L} Nostalgia]

Sounds pretty neat.

I thought over all the song was great, but the intro was a little to long. But thats just me. And honestly i'm not really a fan of the whole "Doink" bass thing. But its okay, its just not ear pleasing to me as other basses. But when the main leads come in thats when it gets hot. Love the leads, the melody too. Wicked sick stuff right 'ere. Keep up the great work yo.

-Clayface

Meonly70 responds:

Thanks man, glad you liked it, maybe the newer version would be in your league?

[Set You Free (Epica)]

Holy shitez.

Holy shit bro, this track is amazingly epic. I'm just sitting here in complete awe, because its hard to belive that this here is with Fl Studio. Seriously bro, you really hit the spot on this one. The vocals fit perfect! Like a fucking glove. I really enjoyed hearing this track progress as you kept showing me over MSN. And now hearing the full track is just wicked. Been waiting on this one haha. But real good, nicely done. Heaps o' fucking energy. Cant wait to dance to this while I'm buzzin XD. But yeah, great fucking track. Love it!

Thats all i really gotta say, keep producin aiight? take care bro.

-Clayface

Review some of my tracks too aye!!!!