mmmburgers's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[Your Eyes - F-777]

Sounds great! ( as always )

This is well put together, great intro. I love that pad! it has a very calming feel to it. I love it man, keep it up man!

10/10
5/5
=D

-Clayface

[Stronger ( Ravin' Remix )]

okay okay...

First of all, your vocals are off key to your melodies. Your melodies are nice i really like them, but when the vocals come in its all off key, you need to find the right key for your melodies and vocals to flow together good.

yeah... my two cents

(if you can, check out my harder beter faster stronger remix?)

-Dj Clayface

ONESTEPAHEAD responds:

THANKS FOR LIKING MY SYNTHS I MADE THIS BACK WHEN I USED 2 SEPERATE PROGRAMS WHERE MATCHING THE VOCALS WAS ALMOST IMPOSSIBLE NOW IM BETTER THOUGH:D

[Teh n00b song]

oh man...

This song brings back SO MUCH memories of Counter Strike 1.6. Gotta love pure pwnage!

[Man Poo (Extreme Club Mix)]

oh mah gawd

MAAAAAAAN POOOOOOOO

Teck071 responds:

hahaha cheers!

[Dusty Iron Grave]

Well...

Well, i...

actualyl like this =D. Your chord progession was very nice, i really liked that alot. the melody was great too man, good stuff here. keep it up bro. sounds pretty good concidering your using fruity loops presents samples and vst's. i liked this, you did a good job here. good luck getting all your shit back that really sucks how you lost everything.

well i think you should deserve a cookie for this, yeah. you are full of win my friend.

for now..

9/10
5/5

-Dj Clayface

Father-of-Death responds:

I don't know if i should say thank you or not. This review is confusing.

[Fredgy - Dance to the Rhythm]

eh its okay.

Well, im going to give you a honest review here. Cause i want you to improve, so please dont take anything to hard. okay? I'm speaking the truth right here. So dont be mad at me for speaking the truth. Anyways the review...

Well first of all (its been said before) this song is a tad too loud. Send all the instruments to a mixer channel, and fiddle around with the knobs untill they're all not hitting the red zone. Stay out of the red zone buddy. And probbaly add a compressor to the kick, that will make it stand out more. Umm the drums are a little bit boring its the same loop over and over. (from what i heard) Try adding some snare rolls, Snare fillers. you know? just to variate the song a little. And change up the pattern of it too, change is good. Sounds like you used 3xOsc (to me it sounds like it, you may have used something else) but anyways, yeah its a great vst if you know how to use it. Maybe try using some of the presets? or even better, get Nexus. Replace some of the synths with a nice saw. Then that would make it better. I'm not really a fan of that "popcorn" kinda of sound. So IMO you should take that out. Umm... maybe add a key change into this song. that would make it sound a tad more better. Also adding a breakdown along with a epic build up. Then this song would be awesome. Maybe add more interesting melodies to this too. Cause im being honest here, im not feeling the main melody at all. It could be WAAAY better. You just gotta work it out. So yeah try that, add more interesting melodies. Well thats all i really gotta say about this song. Its pretty decent...

SO so sum up what i just said ; Fix the volume, make the percussion more interesting, make the melodies more interesting, use different VST's.

Yeah, thats about it. I was being 100% honest. So please if i said anything harsh, dont take it to hard okay. its the truth. deal with it. (haha im not trying to be an asshole)

But yeah, thanks for reviewing my song, and yeah i did have a little free time. so here i am writing reviews. i hope you liked my long juicy review. keep up the good work man, goodluck on future projects! ;)

Vote : 4/5
Rate : 8.5/10

-Dj Clayface

Fredgy responds:

hello there! , first of all.. thanks for the HUGE review! :O
then, reviews like yours, you can't take it to hard.. it is one big help review.. I appreciate that as hell! :O
the first one, about putting everything in mixer channel, I did it already ( I got already another version of this song, where I tried to keep everything out of the red zone, bcause Bjra said me I needed to do it there :p )
then, I know 'bout the drum piece, but i am not a good one in getting some changes in it, and that it sounds right also :p
about the snare rolls/filters, explain me please :D
I didn't use 3xosc, i am not a good one in using that :p
I'll see what I can do, but first I gotta get the things like Nexus then :-)
all the rest, ye I know it could be waay better ;-)
but at the other side, it is just my 5th song :p

Thanks for being honest about the song, that is what helps the most huh! ;-)

Grts
Fredgy

[HappyTranceLoop.(SongVersion)]

Its nice, good stuff.

Well, i loved the loop. And when i finally noticed that the full song is out. I just had to review it. So heres my Review:

First of all, GREAT melody. It really sticks out, and gets stuck in your head.... Which is a very good thing haha. But, really... the only problem that i had with this song is that it is... a little repeative. So what you could do is maybe alter the lead melody a little? Perhaps add a key change in there? (If you know how to do that). The snare was really nice, although it could of been a little louder, I really like to hear a good sounding snare in a song, especially if its a trance/dance song. The break down at around 1:10 ish was a decent breakdown. It could still use some work. But its good, its good. I'm not saying it sucked, it just it could of been... a bit more epic if you know what i mean. Oh and the kick could definitly be a little stronger (unless my headphones are really weak) But i really couldnt hear it. What you could do is in the mixer, add a bass boost and a compresser. That should really make your kick stand out. Your intro was very nice, i really liked that alot, that sweeping noise really adds excitment to the song. Maybe add more snares into the song just to give it that "exciting" feeling. You know? But yeah, other than all that i said... This is a really good song, i LOVE that melody its great! The bass line was nice and solid, so thats good. But yeah, maybe just add a few more melodies into this song, and maybe another hamonizing melody behind the lead. Then it should sound really epic. Well thats all i could really think about, I dont really know what else to say. Great stuff right here, im glad you made a full song out of the loop. Keep up the good work man. AND of course i gave you a 10/10 and a 5/5. This song deserves it. Well thats all, maybe review my song? if you can thanks, if you cant its alright. Yeah thats all i gotta say.. I hope you like my long juicy review :D

- Dj Clayface

Sonomabob responds:

first of all: wow, what a review ;-)
thanks!
- kick is there, even if you cant hear it. perhaps my headset goes deeper than yours. but i didnt want to have a too strong kick.
- more snares? well i am quite bad when it comes to drums...

i am still quite unexperienced, making music now for not a complete year yet
but nevertheless i try to make my best :-)

[Happy Trance Loop.]

Wow great loop

Really good loop man, i love this. You should definitly make this into a complete song.

Sonomabob responds:

thanks ^^

perhaps I will make a full song of it.

[Frequency Overload]

Pretty good song.

Well i think this is pretty good. It'd be a great song for stepmania, Umm... not sure what else to say. But i really enjoyed it. great stuff man. keep it up

10/10
5/5

-Dj Clayface

SessileNomad responds:

mmm...makes me smile to hear you think its a step song, best game ever, i wonder if i can submit this to SMO to see if theyll put it in a mix...hmm.....

thanks dude

[-*Heaven of Inspiration*-]

Wow...

I just dont know what to say about this... its so epic. this is amazing wow. keep up the great work guys!

10/10
5/5
favorited

-Dj Clayface

Argyros responds:

:D Thanks so much! It really means a lot!